How To Write A Movie Script Fast – Script Writing Course

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When beginning to write, most people want to write stories, either in the form of a short story or a novel. Many of us naturally visualise the stories we write – basically we run a movie in our minds. It makes complete sense to write a great story as a screenplay. Again, most enthusiastic new writers are in a hurry and want to know how to write a movie fast!

Without a doubt, speed isn’t the only criterion. Writing screenplays that sell are really what it’s all about. How to combine the two, that’s the question. The two videos below give the points of view of two professionals, a busy independent film maker and a script writer. Both know how to write a good screenplay and firmly believe, with organisation and commitment, anyone can write a screenplay in a month or so.

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On with the show! Both of the professional talking below give screen-writing tips I can readily relate to and address issues that all writers face. We tend to be introverted and perfectionist, and really want even our first draft to be just right. This approach can be stifle that great idea that made us put pen to paper in the first place.

Writing a great script fast can release a writer from the the shackles that bind, allowing him or her to write rubbish, as long as the ideas are flowing. the script can be tidied up later, there’s no need to beat ourselves up before we’ve even  pushed out a first draft.

The first draft is the time for creativity, not grammatical or syntactical perfection. The second draft of the script will be more considered and this is the time for a more objective and critical approach.

Advice On How To Write A Screenplay Fast

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Video Transcript:

Yo, what’s up, guys. I am back in the car with some cool film-making wisdom, some tips to give you guys. So today I want to talk about how to write a screenplay fast. Why would you want to write a screenplay fast? Well check this out. As an independent filmmaker, I talked about a long time that you have a million things that you’re juggling.

You have so much on your plate, so many things to do and I tell people all the time that’s one of the most difficult jobs you could ever take on as being independent filmmaker. So what you want to do, if you’re writing a screenplay, do it really fast. That frees up time to start worrying about the other things.

With that being said, trust me when I tell you this writing a screenplay fast is good for not just saving you time. Some of you might be wondering about quality. This actually will help the quality of your film and I’ll tell you why.

how to write a screenplay in a monthThe last script I wrote I believe is one of the best I’ve ever written in my entire life and it was also the fastest I ever wrote. The reason for that is because I wrote it so quick. Then we had to go through all the processes of, you know, pre-production, casting, you know, finding locations, getting the budget, all that stuff.

We had to go through all those things, so while we were doing that I was adjusting, making small adjustments here and there. To make the the rough draft I spit it out in two weeks. We were honing that in and really making it as good as it could be.

I would bounce it back over to my partner Jennifer and, yeah, and I feel like it was written better since I took the approach of trying to get it done as fast as I could. Always heard then it would be a good idea to sit down for 10 minutes a day and just commit.

You gotta make a big commitment there to say ‘I am gonna commit for the next two weeks of my life to write at least 10 minutes a day’. Everybody has ten minutes of their day that they can devote to something.

The reason that was one of the best things I can do is because I’ve found myself – what happens? You sit down for 10 minutes and once you get into it and you start putting pen to paper, the time goes by and suddenly you’ve been writing for an hour so., even though you dedicated only 10 minutes.

As you put that 10 minutes down, you find yourself in this writing zone and you just keep going. Now oviously if that doesn’t happen it’s okay and you just dedicated your 10 minutes. You wrote and you can close the tablet and, you know, go back to whatever you were doing.

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But I really feel like that was one of the biggest, most helpful things for me when I was writing. The second thing I’ll tell you is something I get from Quentin Tarantino. Tarantino, I was listening to this cool interview with Eli Roth and Quentin Tarantino told Eli Roth he always should write his screenplays and paper by hand, you know old-school style.

And he and Roth was, like, we talked about ‘now I just type it up and quit’. Tarantino’s like ‘you can’t write poetry with a robotic, you know, tapping away on a with an electronic screen. You can’t create art by poking it some.

So you know, of it’s too robotic … it sounded cool to me…. It’s just different. You feel different. It’s got this different vibe to it, when you’re writing ing by hand and I really believe that because I started writing by hand. When I heard that and I tried it and now I do it with everything.

When I write from day to day I’ll write them out by hand. There’s something about it, you’re connected to it more. It’s physical in nature. It’s in the real world with you, so I think that that’s better. And Plus, you can scribble. You can just keep going.

What you want to do is, you want to get (I guess this would be the third tip) we’re gonna get a cheap little 99 cent notebook ,paper tablet notebook, paper tablet and carry it with you at all times, so that if you haven’t gotten your 10 minutes that day you just flip that bad boy over and scribble down for 10 minutes.

Get them, get the ideas out of your head and that that’s gonna be huge because you don’t want to 5 or 10 minutes and not have something . Right on, but be careful – don’t lose it , happened to me.

how to write movie script fastTip number four – on this, what you want to do, what I found to be so helpful was I started by saying I had my intro scene, the very first scene of the movie and then I typed out what I knew. Because I knew what I wanted to happen in the opening of the movie and I knew how the movie should end, and then I had one or two big moments in the movie that I knew.

So I like it I brought out a timeline on a piece of paper. It’s like ‘ intro – this happens, then this happens’. As you’re writing, you know, you’re going from point A to point B. You know where you’re going next and so you’re like ‘how can I get this character? what should this character be doing in order to get them to this point here?’

They visit this point of the story point at the timeline, so I’m telling you right now that was a big help for me. So there are some other things you could do. I think it’s important to listen to motivational things that stay motivated.

Right you know, I would have some of my heroes, like I changed the screen saver and the background on my computer and the background on my phone. I changed those to pictures of my heroes. You know, people that I really respect. Some of my favorite directors and favorite writers and favorite achievers and you know my heroes.

I changed the pictures of those and, you know, it seems silly but you when you see that on a daily basis it’s just a little reminder ‘hey, get to work! hey,you got dreams! hey, you got things to do!’ and it would remind me of what I need to finish and then I had a mission.

So if you got a screenplay you’re working on, get to work. You can do it. You can do it fast and you can tweak it, and it can be amazing and then you can go out and make a cool film. I hope you guys found these tips useful. Please subscribe to my channel. Hit that little annoying Bell. I know it’s stupid but if you hit that Bell it will notify you when I have a video coming up next, so get those things for me and I will talk to you guys soon. Peace out.

Write A Screenplay In less Than A Month

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Video Transcript:

Film Courage:  When do you start writing everyday?

Danny Strong, Screenwriter/Actor: So I have basically the same pattern when I’m writing. Sometimes if I’m in production it will change.  But if I’m just in a writing phase (which is my favorite to be honest with you because I love my schedule as a writer) I wake up, I go somewhere, have breakfast and usually I can go somewhere and write and then I’ll open my computer…so now it’s around 10:30ish and then I return emails for about an hour or an hour and a half, and then I start writing.

And then I write for about three to four hours straight and then I’m done. And that is basically my process. And sometimes it takes me about two hours to get started and then when I get to that two hour mark and haven’t started that’s when self-loathing comes in, so then I do get started. But usually I can get going in about an hour. But usually I can get going to about an hour to an hour and a half.

Film Courage: Is this on a computer that is hooked up to the Internet?

Danny Strong: Yeah, I definitely stay on the Internet because I’m looking things up all the time as I’m writing. Sometimes it’s just random things…like I’m looking for a synonym or something. And I’ll just got to synonym and type in a word and some synonyms will pop up. So it can be as simple as that.

Film Courage: So it’s not a distraction?

Danny Strong: No, not on the whole. I mean it can be a little bit but it works for me. And so that’s my schedule.

Film Courage: What’s the longest writing day you’ve ever had?

how to write a play script step by stepDanny Strong: I don’t like to write once I get tired because then I just lose my focus and the writing is not as good. But the first two seasons on Empire I wrote a lot of the show.

So those would turn into sometimes long days where you’re writing and rewriting an episode and you’re doing a lot of work so sometimes you’re doing a lot of work so sometimes 10 hours. And I don’t like it at all and I think the work suffers for it.

Film Courage: So you think you’re better at the 3-4 hour mark?

Danny Strong: Yeah! That’s why I do it. It’s literally as soon as I start to lose my focus, then I just stop. And I don’t have writer’s block. It’s not a very dramatic thing. There’s no inspiration, I don’t wait for inspiration. I say inspiration is for amateurs.

Amateurs get inspired, professionals just go do it. And it’s not even very dramatic anymore. I mean I just go and I know I’m going to do it. I mean I know I’m going to get stuff done. And it’s very productive to be honest with you.

I find that I get a lot of writing done because I don’t make a big deal about it. It’s not this big dramatic thing for me. I just show up and I just get going. Like I said, it takes sometimes an hour and hour and a half to actually get started. Occasionally two hours!

And then we just start going and I try to be non-judgemental of it. And I don’t sit there and question it or think that I’m not talented or…I just try and do it. And then there’s a phase when you have to edit it and go through it and that is a more critical part of your brain.

writing screenplays that sellBut I do my best not to beat myself up about it. And if I don’t like something I just change it and I just keep working on it and working on it and not turn it into some big melodramatic, artist’s struggle.

I don’t view it that way at all. I will say one thing that I think could be very interesting to people that are writers is what I do is I outline a script very meticulously and my outlines are about 25 pages to 30 pages long.

And then when I go to write the actual first draft, I will not reread one word of what I’ve written until I’ve written the whole script. So for my first pass on a screenplay, I start from the beginning and then I just go…and I go all the way through until I’m done without having read one word of it and it takes about three weeks.

So in three weeks, I’ve written a whole draft and it’s a whole draft and it’s a lot of fun because there is no judgement whatsoever. I’m just writing straight through. And then I go through and very meticulously work through the scenes and that takes two to three weeks and then in six weeks I have a draft but it’s really two drafts because I’ve done one straight through and then one (this sort of meticulous work-through).

And I will say that the second phase of it (the meticulous work-through phase) is the least enjoyable part of the process because it’s the most critical where for a couple weeks I just I have to work through these scenes but I just do it.

And then after that I have a draft to work off of and then there are many drafts after that. But I have this nice foundation.

Film Courage: Going back to what you said about not making a big deal about waiting for inspiration, was it always this way for you?

Danny Strong: No this was over many years of figuring this out. And for the first several years I was writing, I was deep in my acting career and writing was more therapeutic to get my mind off of the very painful trials and tribulations of an acting career because it’s very difficult and you get rejected a lot.

And all of the cliches are absolutely true but I was serious about it but I think it just took awhile of realizing that beating yourself up and I have no talent and this is terrible, I’ll work with a writer and they’ll say “Oh that was sh*t!”

And I’ll say “Don’t worry about it. Don’t worry about if it’s good or bad, just take a look at it and see what could be improved. There’s no reason to be so caustic and hostile about the material. It’s just words on a screen. You can change them. Just change them.” So that’s very much something that guides me in my work.

 

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How To Write A Good Screenplay

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Writing a movie script is one thing, but knowing how to write a good screenplay is a horse of a different colour. It isn’t enough to know all about the mechanics of formatting correctly, or even throwing in some sharp dialogue (or so you think!) Let’s agree that a good screenplay is one that sells and leads to a commercially successful movie.

What makes a script good? What are the magic ingredients? How do these great screenwriters get their inspiration? There is no magic, except the kind generated by dedication and hard work. If you wait around, looking out of the window, expecting that flash of inspiration, you’ll be waiting a long time. It happens, but it’s rare.

For the vast majority of writers, the seed of an idea pops up in the mind and grows over a period of weeks or months. Whatever he or she is doing, the the idea is being nurtured in the back of their mind. Before getting down to some serious script writing, each scene is planned carefully to create the naturally flowing story crafted to capture the hearts of the audience.

How To Write A Good Movie Script – Two Perspectives From Professionals

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Video Transcript:

My writing process has evolved over the years but I’m always very much concerned with outlining and giving a shape to it before I dive in. Whenever I’ve tried to just take a run at it I find myself writing myself into impossible corners and having to back up and rethink things.

I tend to think very much about structure and organization and I do a lot of preliminary sketches and notes and put post-its on the wall to figure out where certain scenes are before I actually dive in.

I don’t do outlines. I don’t plan where I’m going because I like to be surprised by what I’m writing. The greatest twist in the history of cinema I would suggest humbly is Darth Vader saying ‘I’m your father’. I love writing things when one character says something and you’re like ‘well that’s a joke’ and then you, you know, you go that way and I think outlines you know prevent that happening.

Obviously most people do them and that’s great and if that works for you then brilliant but it’s me personally. I like to be surprised and in order to do that, that can only come from listening to the characters. They’ve become very real people to us.

I mean they are obviously versions of ourselves at some level and we know where they want to go in life. We each have an instinct about our own characters and I think we have an instinct about each other’s characters.

How to write a good script for movie guideOur daily routine for working is, when we’re writing, is to write five days a week, sort of 10 till 5 and it pretty much like a day job. A lot of that time is spent mining the interiors of the characters. It’s not necessarily physically writing but we might spend two hours discussing the motivation of something people say.

Write you know and I do think that that usually, with some exceptions, people are strongest writing about a millionaire. So for instance, I think Woody Allen is uniquely brilliant at writing about the world he came from and no one knows the nuances of that better than him but not by his own standards.

I think he’s quite clumsy when he tries to film about London. When you’re adapting a novel you have to take into account, especially with a well known work, what the audience remembers most from that book. You don’t have to remain true to the actual structure of the book or to specific lines.

You have to remain true to what people remember about the book. So they’re going to be moments that stand out in their minds, that they’re waiting to see, the scenes that they expect. Well Marigold is a very free adaptation and it got freer and freer. I mean the book actually got reissued with a new title and people reading it slightly baffled as to them in the end.

All we took from it is old people go to India, which is not say that’s not a great book, it just it was a process of development and the more people that read it they had that haven’t read the book, or like ‘why don’t we change that and change that’.

So gradually the book … because the longer the process of development, that likelihood is the further and further you’ll get away from the book itself. I learnt a lot at during working on the thick of it about this process. Very nearly everybody who are the core actors were also writers.

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And I think that there’s something about having that bit of your head that can stand back and look at the whole and understands it as a structure and as a beast. That is very useful particularly if you’re going to use improvising. So really it’s about story. I mean, I think story is the key to writing.

You do spend a lot of time by yourself when you’re writing the first draft particularly and I’ve gotten out of the habit of showing anyone anything before the first draft is done. Because I’m too paranoid about what they’ll think of it.

I won’t even show my wife uh when it is done. I try to send it off and I’ve gotten better at not getting emotionally upset when the response is not ‘this is the best thing I’ve ever read in my life’. I think once something has worked you can analyze it post the event, like you analyze a rally at a tennis rally.

And explain why the two, you know, combatants, chose those shots at that time and why that worked but I think you you slowly learn what works and what doesn’t. I think with most things again the analogy was with sport the best way of learning is to watch someone who’s really good at it.

So watch stuff that you really like and respect and you will imbibe some of that and then you will make it your own. It’s an interesting challenge with screenwriting because I can’t spend page after page designing exactly the way a scene will look.

That’s the job of the director. That’s the job of the production designers. I have to captured the actions and the tone and the rhythm of the scene. It’s kind of always on set for everything I write … people still say like ‘that’s weird’ that the writers saying ‘where else am I going to be?’

How to write a good script for beginnersLike I’m so I’m lonely on my desk. It’s, you know, this is the good stuff. This is why I do it – to be here – this is the good stuff. But conversely, when it’s not good … when they, you know, you walk into the bedroom of the character and you go ‘yeah that’s not what I thought’.

When they cast someone you go ‘really?’ That’s, you know, that’s tough but I mean that comes with it. Those are the breaks, you know. Listening, I think, for me has been really critical. I’ve worked with some brilliant script editors and some brilliant producers early on and they have basically taught me the rules.

Then of course those rules are there to be broken but I think without understanding them it’s really hard to keep going. I when I first started out I had a a piece of post-it note stuck to my screen that said ‘nothing worthwhile is easy’, so that when I got a rejection I would say to myself ‘well it’s not supposed to be easy’.

It’s going to be difficult. The real job in getting into this business is sticking around long enough and continuing to get better and better at what you do, because the truth is if you write a great script they’ll find you.

They’re aching for good writers, so it’s the ability to be ready when the door opens. It’s not about how which door you knock on first. It’s about, yes, getting the job as an assistant, keeping yourself in there, continuing to work at it and waiting you will get your chance – then the question is ‘are you ready?’

How To Write A Good Movie Script – Attention To Detail

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When screenwriters finally get around to writing the story they’ve had in their head for so long they often want to hurry and get that first draft on the page without planning it out. Getting those 90 to 100 pages for that first draft often really is the hardest part but if you sit down and just start writing when you finish it’s really not a first draft.

Instead, it’s a rough first draft. Now I have no objection to doing this but the problem is some of the scenes that just get thrown onto the page to get that rough first draft completed stay in the screenplay when they really don’t fit, once you start developing it and really crafting your script.

I’ve read and analysed literally thousands of screenplays in depth from top Hollywood directors down to writers who didn’t know how to format a screenplay, and across the board the most common problem I see is writers leaving irrelevant or boring scenes in the script.

How to write a good movie script 2018Actually, most professionals know to take those out but aspiring writers too often write scenes to fill the pages to get to that magical number of 85 or 90 page minimum and the minimum keeps changing, so they keep writing to get to that magic number.

But when a scene is plopped into just add to the page count, it can really mess things up. When it comes to the plot every scene in your script needs to be crafted so it arises organically and the next scene just comes naturally.

Of course, it takes a lot of work to make it seem so organic and natural but that’s the work you need to do to write a great script. Every scene in your script needs to be purposeful and meet at least two of the three key objectives.

If it doesn’t, then it either needs to be cut or rewritten so that it does meet at least two of the following three objectives. Now here are the three objectives:

amplify the theme
move the plot forward
develop the character arc

Now let’s take a look at each of these. Number one amplify the theme. Your theme is basically the whole point of the story. What’s your story really about on a universal level? Your story needs to offer some kind of insight into the human experience.

We become riveted, or I should say, audiences become riveted when we see characters confronting real-life situation. A movie script should show an amplified version of what we normally deal with. The lesson your character learns is the theme of your story.

Your scenes and sequences need to always have an eye toward your theme. Your images, your dialogue – they need to reference a theme throughout your screenplay and each scene should amplify the theme in some manner.

Number two objective is move the plot forward … In the film The Wolf of Wall Street for example, Leonardo DiCaprio plays Jordan Belfort, the real-life wolf and DiCaprio does this amazing thematic speech about money. It’s inspiring to the employees while he gives the speech and then at the end he gives them a call to action which sets up the next point.

Having that speech turned into action for the plot is critical. He’s not just merely pontificating when he gives this speech to the employees. He actually has a very specific intention and in that scene all three objectives are met.

The theme is amplified, it moves the story forward and then that brings us to the third objective which – is number three, develop the character arc. The scene from the film that I just mentioned shows us Jordan Belfort’s character and it intensifies what we’ve already seen.

It builds tension around the question of ‘how long he can push things?’ Watching it, you can feel DiCaprio’s strong personal intention behind what he’s saying. It looks like he’s just motivating his employees but you can sense that he’s on a mission.

So that’s why it’s developing his character arc or revealing his character, also because this scene accomplishes all three things. It makes that scene one of the most memorable scenes in recent movie history in my view. Even if you hate the principal he speaks of, which is all about the money.

So those are your three objectives and you should try to fulfill at least two of them in each and every scene, if not all three. Now for a quick summary – to dramatically improve your script go scene by scene and see which of the three objectives or purposes above that it meets.

If it doesn’t mean at least two of them, then rewrite it or take it out. Feel free to also add whatever one is missing if it only meets two, but most importantly make sure it meets at least two of the three objectives.

I hope you have found this helpful. If you’d like to have a professional assessment on your screenplay check out the types of script analysis that I offer. Again, this is Melody Jackson. Let me know if you want any of my help and either way, whether you have me review your script or you do it on your own, keep these three key objectives in mind. Learn them inside and out and you will be well on your way to excellence in your screenwriting.

How to write a good screenplay – 3 Key Objectives For Every Scene

How To Write A Good Script For A Movie

How to write a good script

Any fool can write a movie script, and I’m sure that the great screenplay writers out there will laugh, but also tend to agree with me. How to write a good script for a movie, there’s the rub. It’s not even twice, or three times as difficult. Think of it like comparing your house with a skyscraper – not only is it going to take much more time to build, but you also have to know how to do it.

Once you get the script format down pat (and it’s not that hard) you need to know what makes a great movie script tick. Everything seems to be in the right place to enhance the story. Is this by chance? Of course not. Successful screenplay writers know exactly where each event should be to drive the movie forward.

Add some snappy dialogue and your half-way there. But, yes, you’ve got it – half-way isn’t enough. The video below takes a look at the script of Collateral, a 2004 film starring Tom Cruise, and examines why it’s so good. If you want detailed help with writing and selling a script, check out the course by James Lamberg – he guarantees that you’ll sell your script. Can’t be bad.

How To Write A Good Screenplay – Collateral Analysis

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Hi, I’m Michael. This is Lessons from the Screenplay. At first glance, Michael Mann’s 2004 thriller Collateral might seem like just another run-of-the-mill action movie. But in between its action sequences lies a well-crafted story of personal transformation over the course of a single, terrifying evening.

A cab driver, Max, is taken hostage by a hit-man and forced to drive him around Los Angeles as he eliminates the targets on his list. This set up puts the protagonist and the antagonist in constant, direct conflict, allowing each of them to learn from each other.

How to write a good script for a movie tipsAnd while you might not think that a ruthless murderer would be the best influence, as screenwriter Stuart Beattie says… “The killer’s gotta have a point of view.” “That was always the idea behind him-that he actually had some, you know, some solid viewpoints.”

So today I want to examine why it’s important that an antagonist represent everything the protagonist lacks… To look at how characters filled with contradiction can feel more true-to-life… And show why one of the most important moments of character change doesn’t come at the end of the story, but directly in the middle.

Let’s take a look at Collateral. Living in society is hard. We all have important goals we want to achieve, yet are often afraid to take the necessary steps to attain them. This tension is also found in great characters. As John Yorke writes in his book, Into the Woods: A Five-Act Journey Into Story…

“This conflict between who a character is, and who they want to be, is real life’s gift to drama. Writers have always known that when their characters act in a manner they profess to disapprove of, when they lie, when they self-sabotage and generally act contrary to their conscious proclamations and beliefs, they are far more interesting, far more exciting to write, and feel far more true to life.”

In Collateral, this contradiction is immediately apparent in the protagonist, Max. Max is not your typical cabbie. In his first scene, we see the juxtaposition between him and the other cabbies.

“…some unshaven, swapping stories, counting cash, one stands on the passenger seat to shout over the roof to his pal, spills his coffee, couldn’t care less…

Not Max. His cab is fly. Among cabbies he is GQ. We soon learn that this is because Max doesn’t think of himself as a cab driver.

“…limo company I’m putting together. Island Limos. It’s going to be like an island on wheels. It’s going to be a cool groove, like a club experience. When you get to the airport, you’re not going to want to get out of my limo. So I do this part-time until I get my Benzes off leases, staff up, get the right client list, you know, things like that.”

 

“An uncomfortable beat.”

This is Max’s facade. He wants to be thought of as someone who runs a successful, A-list limo company, so he presents himself as being just around the corner from making it a reality. After all, the cab driving is just temporary.

“I’m not in this for the long-haul. I’m just fillin’ in. It’s just temporary while I’m getting some things shaped up. This is just temporary”

“How long you been driving?”

“Twelve years.”

“Hardly temporary…”

How to write a good screenplay guideHere we see Max’s contradiction fully rendered. He wants to own a successful limousine company more than anything, yet he’s been driving a cab and making excuses for twelve years. This is his character’s flaw / weakness, and we soon see that his lack of self-confidence and inability to take risks are holding his inner self back.

In his book, John Yorke creates a simple visualization to help demonstrate the relationship between the facade and the inner self over the course of the story. The protagonist begins clinging to a facade— the idea of themselves that they want others to see. But hidden away is their inner self— the part of them they must learn to embrace to become who they need to be. So what drives the character to change?

“What’s your name?”

“Max.”

“Max? I’m Vincent.”

Coming into conflict with the antagonist. A person uniquely suited to push the protagonist in exactly the right direction. And as John Yorke writes…

“The antagonist they fear, then – the ‘monster’ they must overcome – is the embodiment of the very thing lacking in themselves.”

The function of the antagonist is to strip away the facade of the protagonist and force the inner self to rise up. Enter Vincent. A well-dressed man of action who plays by his own rules, he is the anti-Max in almost every way. When Max picks up Vincent and agrees to be his taxi for the evening, he has no idea what he has really signed up for. (loud crash)

“Oh no! You killed him?”

“No. I shot him. The bullets and the fall killed him.”

And while this is clearly the worst night of Max’s life, it’s also, in many ways, the best. Since Vincent is everything that Max isn’t, he directly and indirectly forces Max to stand up for himself and do things he never thought he could. For example, early on, cops stop the cab while there is a dead man in the trunk.

“Get rid of ‘em.”

“How?”

“You’re a cabby. Talk yourself out of a ticket.”

But Max isn’t able to.

“Get out the cab. Open the trunk. Come on.”

He’s still clinging to his facade and suppressing his inner self. Luckily, the cops get called away before Vincent has to kill them. Later, Max’s boss call over the radio…

“Max? Max? You out there, you son of a bitch?”

To get him to stop calling, Vincent poses as an official, and encourages Max to stand up to him.

“You tell him to stick this cab up his fat ass.”

“I can’t do that. That’s my boss.”

“So?”

“I need my job.”

“No, you don’t.”

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This chips away at Max’s facade, and forces the inner self to begin to emerge.

“And next time you pull any shit, I’m… I’m gonna stick this yellow cab up your fat ass.”

Over time, Max even starts to stand up to Vincent.

“Come on, Vincent, give the dude a pass.”

“I’m working here.”

“No, listen. You the one sitting here talking about improvisation. You like the guy, you like how he plays. Let’s just play a little jazz. Come on.”

“Improv… That’s funny, coming from you.”

And when they visit Max’s mom in the hospital, the depth of Max’s facade is embarrassingly exposed.

“Limousine companies.”

“Is that right?”

“He drives famous people around.”

“Famous people. Limousine companies. Now that’s quite an achievement.”

How to write a good script for a movie beginnersAt the end of the scene, Max steals Vincent’s briefcase— a demonstration of his inner self growing in strength. During the entire first half of the screenplay Vincent is destroying Max’s facade and teasing out his inner self. And if we look at the the progression of these two lines, there is a clear trajectory.

The facade is chipped away at and the inner self is forced to rise until something happens— they collide at the midpoint of the story. John Yorke says of the midpoint:

“As a story progresses and need supplants want, the traits that help a character sustain their outer appearance are slowly transformed by the ‘better’ angels within. Need becomes conscious at the inciting incident, is embraced at the end of the second act, and at the midpoint triumphs for the first time. The subconscious has been dredged and brought to the surface to take over.”

The midpoint of Collateral is shortly after Max destroys Vincent’s files.

“You are screwing with my work!”

He needs the list of names to finish the job, so he sends Max in to talk to the dangerous drug lord, Felix.

“You go in there, say you’re me. Score the backups. They’ll be on flash drive or CD.”

“If I don’t pull it off, then…”

“They will kill you.”

“I can’t do this. I can’t.”

This scene begins almost exactly halfway through the film’s runtime. And in this case, the screenplay creates a literal example of the metaphorical change happening in the story structure. To overcome his character’s weakness, Max has needed to be more like Vincent— the embodiment of everything he’s not. Now, his inner self and his facade collide, as he is asked to become Vincent.

“Say it’s Vincent. I’m Vincent.“

Inside the club, Max is threatened by Felix, and it’s clear that the old Max is not cutting it.

“So, tell me Vincent. What do you think?”

How to write a good script 2018So just before the jig is up and Max is killed, his inner self truly takes over and for the first time we really see what he’s capable of.

“I think you should tell the guy behind me to put that gun down.”

“What did you say?”

“I said, I think you should tell the guy behind me to put his gun away before I take it and beat his bitch ass to death with it.”

Soon, Vincent’s words are even coming out of Max’s mouth.

“Improvise. Adapt to the environment. Darwin. Shit happens. I Ching. Whatever, man. We gotta roll with it.”

“Gotta roll with it. Adapt. Darwin. I Ching.”

Max successfully acquires the list and makes it out alive. The midpoint represents an important change for the protagonist. As John Yorke writes…

“A new ‘truth’ dawns on our hero for the first time; the protagonist has captured the treasure or found the ‘elixir’ to heal their flaw.” But the story, obviously, isn’t over. And he goes on to write… “At this stage in the story they don’t quite know how to handle it correctly. The ‘journey back’ is therefore built on how the hero reacts to possessing the ‘elixir’ and whether they will learn to master it in a wise and useful way.”

The first half of the film was getting Max to recognize he can overcome his weaknesses. The question for the second half of the film is…will he? Collateral demonstrates how an antagonist can be designed to bring out the best version of the protagonist.

It shows that a character who expresses the contradictory nature of human beings not only feels more realistic and relatable, but also lends itself to dramatic story structure. And it highlights the importance of the midpoint, the moment when the hero’s inner self truly emerges for the first time.

In the case of Max, he must learn to use this newfound strength to try to survive the rest of this fateful night, which will leave one of the characters alive, and the other nothing more than collateral. Another thing I love about Collateral is that the antagonist goes on a character arc that is similar to the protagonist’s.

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